Pip: Welcome to O'Writer PUB, where the fiction arrives without warning and leaves you staring at the ceiling.
Mara: Today we're spending the whole episode with one story — a piece by Brian M'Conchogrye that moves through war, marriage, survival, and whatever comes after. It covers a lot of ground in a short space.
Pip: Let's start with the story itself — and what the word "end" actually carries.
Конец
Mara: The piece opens on a cemetery, fog touching crosses, a city firing celebratory salvos in the distance — and a man walking away from men with guns at his back. The word on the banners people carry through Dublin is "Конец." End. And the text pauses on that: "Ёмкое слово, за ним столько много всего, что иногда лучше не знать, после чего оно."
Pip: A dense word with too much behind it — better sometimes not to know what it follows. That's the whole story compressed into one sentence.
Mara: And the story earns that compression. Patrick is a corporal, one gun crew, one nurse — Djenni, his girlfriend from school, who followed him into the trench and one day after a bombardment simply asked him to marry her. A passing chaplain with stomach trouble gave them a minute. Two grenade rings for wedding bands, a pull of whiskey, one shot from the gun they called Buh as a salute.
Pip: Buh, because that was the only sound it knew. The romance of wartime logistics is something else entirely.
Mara: The story doesn't let that warmth settle. War, the text says, is like plague — you either survive it in uniform or you're found in a ploughed field. Patrick thinks the thought that gets him in trouble: "А мы люди." We are people. It hisses on his mind and claws at him for thinking it.
Mara: He knows the gun has torn things apart. He knows he has killed in close combat. But the real damage is interior — war has moved into his head, named itself "This," and started rearranging the furniture, evicting childhood and whatever happiness lived there.
Pip: Djenni meanwhile is washing the gun barrel with soap, whispering to it that cleanliness leads to good things. Patrick does not agree. He figures God will sort it out — but while God hasn't started yet, people are in a hurry.
Mara: Patrick eventually maneuvers Djenni off the front, talking the lieutenant into cutting orders. She leaves. She never arrives home. Her parents don't know where she is. The postscript tells us she's alive, remarried, apparently happy — and still believes Patrick is somewhere in France, sitting on a gun carriage, looking at soup.
Pip: The archive postscript is the real gut punch: in the heavenly index of the World War, "Hitler" is crossed out and "Kavana" written in. And for now — no war.
Mara: It's a story about what war does to a person after the shooting stops — the way it becomes a relationship you can't quite leave, and the strange logic of deciding your own death might be the one useful thing you have left to offer.
Pip: A story that ends on a cemetery, a loaded question about immortality, and a clerical correction in heaven's own records.
Mara: The ideas underneath it — what we owe each other in impossible circumstances, and what survives — are worth sitting with until next time.
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